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Oh No You Didn't by Frizz-of-Fury Oh No You Didn't by Frizz-of-Fury
8/9/12 Edit: Ignore the background I don't know what the heck I'm doin with it yet -_-

So I tweaked those things we were talking about, Az's chemise was left alone cause when I did the gold highlights it looked like a bad Ren fair costume T~T I might still play with it later, see what happens.


Ok real quick this is still a work in progress cause Iím giving it a background A REAL ONE!! *gasp*
But the reason Iím posting now is cause Iím stuck on somethings.

1: Ieda smoke ring or no smoke ring? Or should said smoke ring be moved farther away from her face?
2: should I have Azís eyes glowing?
3: Is the gold chemise on Az ok or should I make it lighter?

Iíve been going back forth for forever on these things -_- help!
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:iconmilady71:
Milady71 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Love Elle's expression
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:iconcrystalgreene:
CrystalGreene Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
either father from her face, not at all OR just a line of smoke slithering out of her mouth. like "whatevs... smoking is cool... everyone's doin' it." (lol)

no glowing. i think she should look more bored rolling her eyes upward

i like the gold accents but not the gold chemise. you're on the right track with yellow being a compliment to purple, but i'd try pastel yellow but not like Elle's off white cream. more yellow gray ish ness.... i dunno. i don't like how it is now (except the gold brooch thing on her bodice, that's cool)


hope you don't mind me telling you exactly what i think. that's how I am, and , well.. you asked XD
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:iconcrystalgreene:
CrystalGreene Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
like, with her lips half closed on the side not blowing the smoke... you know?? Ok since I'm apparently obsessed with explaining myself fully, I took a reference photo of my own lips just now blowing imaginary smoke. Here. My job is done.

i.imgur.com/CWnzE2M.jpg
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seebop Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think you should leave the background as is, it looks great. I'ts got great balance and due to its smooth unfinished look, brings more contrast and concentration on the women. I love it!!! GREAT JOB!! :icongreatjobplz:
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:iconnutellamonster:
Nutellamonster Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really like the work on background. argh can never manage to draw a backgroung into my comics -.-
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ;p

I hate backgrounds -_- that stupid thing is taking longer then the three girls put together did. . .I'm still working on it *sigh*
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:iconnutellamonster:
Nutellamonster Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Solution: Make a comic based on background! :dummy:
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
. . .actually that sounds kinda cool
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:iconnutellamonster:
Nutellamonster Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Comic based on the frustration over background - without background! ahh its like inception :stare:
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chocadopt Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Keep the smoke ring! I like the character it gives Iedra.
Yes, Azreal's eyes should definitely glow.
If you can make it lighter, yes. But it was one of the last things I noticed about the picture, so I'm not sure it's that big of a deal.

Wonderful work!
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D

I like the smoke ring, as for her eyes glowing. . .I already added that part but you can't tell cause she's so pale -_-
I'm playing around with darkening it up so it'll show
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Hotaru-86 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
You know who those three remind me of? Azreal reminds me of Sally from The Nightmare Before Christmas. Elle reminds me of Alice and Iedra reminds me of Queen Elizabeth The First.
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol! kinda ;p
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:iconhotaru-86:
Hotaru-86 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
It would actually be cool and funny if you did them in their Halloween costume designs. Even StressedJenny did an image of Mias and Elle as Vegeta and Bulma.
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha we'll see, I'm trying to be better about posting holiday stuff
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:iconhotaru-86:
Hotaru-86 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
It's okay. You can do whatever you feel like doing. Only the influence can come from with you.
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Austrailia Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Az is okay but Ieda's smoke ring should be removed from her face...Otherwise love it!!
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Who's the Alice girl in the middle? :iconloveeyesplz:
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, that's how I draw StressedJenny's char Elle :D
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I realized who it was immediately after posting! :D You do lovely work!!!
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahaha and by then it's to late to take the message back!
though now that I look I didn't say who owns who in the description, oops!!
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
;P
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TheAnonymBrainwash Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
*-*
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:iconbillytheixi:
billytheixi Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
The background and the dresses are amazing. You put so much detail into each one!
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
the truth is I hate backgrounds, with out ref I suck so bad T~T
Dresses on the other hand! I can draw those all day long
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:iconbillytheixi:
billytheixi Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
You're very welcome! I don't like drawing backgrounds either.
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:iconfrizz-of-fury:
Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I vote backgrounds should draw themselves -__- yes, I like this
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:iconbillytheixi:
billytheixi Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
I second that!
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:iconlena-rigyi-up:
lena-rigyi-up Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Perfect!
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:iconmicamone:
micamone Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gosh that background
@.@
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:iconstressedjenny:
StressedJenny Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Professional Filmographer
:icondatassplz: Dat background. Urgh! every update just gets better and better!
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:iconlittle-miss-kay:
Little-Miss-Kay Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
HNNGGG <3
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DemonxRose Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
1. The ring is epic. KEEP IT. It looks weird when its close to her face so away and if she can do magic make it a dragon than joke around and say puff the magic dragon came out to play or something XD 2.Make them a tad darker and definite glow. And maybe make her tattoos a tad bit darker. I think personally to make the top a red orange like her skirt or white to show off her hair and the coloring ;) By the way EPIC WIN. Looks good enough to lick.... EWWWWW. Sorry i'm out of it today too tired with school. If you want suggestions for the back ground just ask i'll try to brain fart some out if you like.
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SuirenShinju Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It still looks AWESOME!
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:iconsuirenshinju:
SuirenShinju Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think Az' eyes are glowin' a lil too much. You can't see where her pupils are lookin'.
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AvalonRae Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing any way you make it!
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The-Toy-Box-Charades Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
1.) I would say you should spread that smoke ring out a bit more.
2.) Hm...yes, make them glow a bit.
3.) Perhaps lighten the gold.

This is all very well done, if I do say so myself.
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StressedJenny Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Professional Filmographer
HOLY WOW!

LUSH!

This is looking amazing so far but to help out, I'd say maybe lower the opacity on the smoke ring to see more of Iedra's pout... or more to the right a bit. Maybe a subtle glow on Az's eyes... and maybe the bodice a bit lighter or just a bit of shine to make it more goldie, but still. Wow! Lovely! I love the colours for all the dresses.
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astutalicentia Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I concur with *Little-Miss-Kay.
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:iconlittle-miss-kay:
Little-Miss-Kay Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
1 Id say farther away from her face
2 I'd like to see how the glowing eyes look
3 maybe put a bit of shine on the gold.


Also. ADJAKDJSJSK this is gorgeous! :iconsupertighthugplz: :heart: thankyouuuu
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:iconcutie-chanxd:
Cutie-chanXD Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
HOT DAMN!! :D Now I REALLY want Ieda's top
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SuirenShinju Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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