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Oh No You Didn't by Frizz-of-Fury Oh No You Didn't by Frizz-of-Fury
8/9/12 Edit: Ignore the background I don't know what the heck I'm doin with it yet -_-

So I tweaked those things we were talking about, Az's chemise was left alone cause when I did the gold highlights it looked like a bad Ren fair costume T~T I might still play with it later, see what happens.


Ok real quick this is still a work in progress cause Iím giving it a background A REAL ONE!! *gasp*
But the reason Iím posting now is cause Iím stuck on somethings.

1: Ieda smoke ring or no smoke ring? Or should said smoke ring be moved farther away from her face?
2: should I have Azís eyes glowing?
3: Is the gold chemise on Az ok or should I make it lighter?

Iíve been going back forth for forever on these things -_- help!
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Milady71 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Love Elle's expression
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CrystalGreene Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
either father from her face, not at all OR just a line of smoke slithering out of her mouth. like "whatevs... smoking is cool... everyone's doin' it." (lol)

no glowing. i think she should look more bored rolling her eyes upward

i like the gold accents but not the gold chemise. you're on the right track with yellow being a compliment to purple, but i'd try pastel yellow but not like Elle's off white cream. more yellow gray ish ness.... i dunno. i don't like how it is now (except the gold brooch thing on her bodice, that's cool)


hope you don't mind me telling you exactly what i think. that's how I am, and , well.. you asked XD
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CrystalGreene Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
like, with her lips half closed on the side not blowing the smoke... you know?? Ok since I'm apparently obsessed with explaining myself fully, I took a reference photo of my own lips just now blowing imaginary smoke. Here. My job is done.

i.imgur.com/CWnzE2M.jpg
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seebop Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think you should leave the background as is, it looks great. I'ts got great balance and due to its smooth unfinished look, brings more contrast and concentration on the women. I love it!!! GREAT JOB!! :icongreatjobplz:
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Nutellamonster Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really like the work on background. argh can never manage to draw a backgroung into my comics -.-
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Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ;p

I hate backgrounds -_- that stupid thing is taking longer then the three girls put together did. . .I'm still working on it *sigh*
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Nutellamonster Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Solution: Make a comic based on background! :dummy:
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Frizz-of-Fury Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
. . .actually that sounds kinda cool
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Nutellamonster Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Comic based on the frustration over background - without background! ahh its like inception :stare:
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lottielollies Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Keep the smoke ring! I like the character it gives Iedra.
Yes, Azreal's eyes should definitely glow.
If you can make it lighter, yes. But it was one of the last things I noticed about the picture, so I'm not sure it's that big of a deal.

Wonderful work!
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